As time passes
These memories linger in my mind
One chain connects these
Memories to portray an image
But some memories are
Lies and fake
While others are yet to be explored
Would you be the one
To give me the potential required
To complete this endless puzzle
Short but simple.
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The poem holds a lot of potential to expand on what your memories can do. Where they can lead you, where you want to be without them, I would suggest expanding or even sharing a part of a memory you can recall and shedding some light on what memories are fake and lies.
Great foundation for more. You give general ideas of what these memories are like, and what the mean to you, perhaps including some examples would go well in showing how/why you were inspired to feel the way youre feeling
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